Reviews for A Spin on Things
the cat takes chapter 10 . 1/18/2004
public school?, sometimes i wish i was british. maybe then i wouldn't be so confused.
but anyways, the story's taking off, and making me bounce with excitement...
spurs0405champs chapter 10 . 1/5/2004
That was an awesome chapter! I think it was one of the best so far because the story is starting to come along really well. Even though the beginning was it a little slow (doesn't matter cuz I loved it anyway), it was necessary to develop the characters and set the settings. I like the interaction that's happening between Ellie and Ed. It's kind of like a I-don't-hate-you-anymore-because-I-understand-you-more-but-I-still-don't-like-you attitude that's really realistic. Okay...just one question because I'm not British, but when you say "public" do you mean private schools, where the parents pay for the schooling...because to me that's the only thing that would make sense. Alrighty, great chapter can't wait to read more!
KN chapter 10 . 1/5/2004
This is an absolute witty work...and I for one would love to see it updated more often.
What I find intriguing about this story is not the plot line but the character development.
Eddie and Ellie two different personalities but from the same world...This chapter had been an eye opener to Ellie's mysterious past. And though there is a hate-hate relationship going, I am keeping my fingers crossed on the love part.
What would happen during the trip to the states? ONly you can tell.
So update soon...And keep up the GOOD work
Coffee Shopper chapter 10 . 1/5/2004
A brilliant plot. And the writing is fantastic too. But since I'm not British all those government terms kind of throw me off. Like Conservative... and things like that.
It's interesting to read, and I especially enjoy the banter between Ed and Ellie... but when is something going to happen? Because the first ten chapters have been kind of... slow. As in there isn't much that happens between Ellie and Ed.
I hope you update soon.
SAngel chapter 10 . 1/5/2004
they are so adorable together!
loves him chapter 9 . 12/12/2003
lol, love the last line. Um...sorry that I haven't reviewed any sooner! I'm not all that great at following stories, even ones that I love, like this one. I was online when I just remembered your story and then I decided to look through Review History and it ONLY took me half an hour or so to find the right story! Anyways, UPDATE SOON!
the cat takes chapter 9 . 12/8/2003
AHA! i knew i'd been forgetting to check up on something...
what a pleasant surprise, coming back and finding so many chapters
it's fun! makes me want to try writing about politics...
Minyaithwen chapter 9 . 12/4/2003
GO LEFT-WINGERS! Please do NOT ask me why I am still living in America. Probably because I'm 14 and don't feel and urge to leave my parents because of our stupid presidend. Ug. See you got me all worked up. Oh well.
I love this story. i makes me smile. I like it a lot. jsut to prove to you that I will return for more, i put you on my favorites list. There. Happy? Good, now you are obligated to update. ::wink:: That's all for now. toodles!
joe chapter 9 . 11/30/2003
that was great, please update soon
spurs0405champs chapter 9 . 11/29/2003
Hey! That was a great chapter! I see that you're one of those left winged politicans...haha...I am so conservative we're probably complete opposites. Like, I am one of those so called Bush supporters...LOL! Anyways, back to the writing, it was a great chapter and I'm glad you've figured out where you want the plot to go. Can't wait to see what you have next!
loves him chapter 8 . 11/8/2003
I love both of them, UPDATE SOON!
loves him chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
jess1586 chapter 8 . 11/1/2003
really like it, written really well and it's a good read...cant wait for more chapters!
spurs0405champs chapter 8 . 10/31/2003
O...I liked that chapter better than the last one! This was very well written, with enough humor and expression in it...and it was proper Enlgish but to a point where it didn't seem too formal.

I see Ellie and Ed are getting a little's a very good thing. Well I can't wait to see what happens next between them. Can't wait for the next chapter.
cerillion chapter 8 . 10/30/2003
nice to see you've updated! hope to see more soon.
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