Reviews for River
Candyluv18 chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
wow that's really good! My grandmother has a small river beside her house and it reminds me of it! Well written!
Star-Gir1 chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
Aww, thats so sweet! _ Keep on writing, you are very talented! :)
BrokenLover chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
wow this is magnificent I like it alot

-Anna-
StarWolf chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
That was so beautiful...how the water soothes the person in the poem...good job! I really liked it.

~*StarWolf*~

P.S. Thank you for reviewing my poem, as well. I'm going to read some of your other stuff now. *runs off*
Droplets of Blood chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
that was very good. i like how u were speaking to the river. i liked the emotion.

btw, thanx 4 reviewing in the forest. i will try to make more like that, but it's hard. :)

~sasha~
Needa S chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
Wow..Beautiful...Outstanding job. Thank-you for your review.
Desecre-Demorte chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
I really like the personality and emotion the river takes on...how it has a kind of secret knowledge and peace that sort of sinks into anyone nearby. This poem flows wonderfully and has a great rhyme scheme. Great job.

*Desecre Demorte*
Sparkly Liz chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
Again, your rhyming is amazing and really works. There are very few who can rhyme, and even fewer who can rhyme well.

Liz
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
I've never seen anything quite like this. It's brilliant.

~Heart of the Sword
Miss Marauder chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
Wow! This was really good! I wish I could write like this! It was so sad...
flowers in May chapter 1 . 5/14/2003
this is really good. the sound of the river works so calming, just thought I should say that