Reviews for River |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow that's really good! My grandmother has a small river beside her house and it reminds me of it! Well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, thats so sweet! _ Keep on writing, you are very talented! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is magnificent I like it alot -Anna- |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful...how the water soothes the person in the poem...good job! I really liked it. ~*StarWolf*~ P.S. Thank you for reviewing my poem, as well. I'm going to read some of your other stuff now. *runs off* |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was very good. i like how u were speaking to the river. i liked the emotion. btw, thanx 4 reviewing in the forest. i will try to make more like that, but it's hard. :) ~sasha~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow..Beautiful...Outstanding job. Thank-you for your review. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the personality and emotion the river takes on...how it has a kind of secret knowledge and peace that sort of sinks into anyone nearby. This poem flows wonderfully and has a great rhyme scheme. Great job. *Desecre Demorte* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, your rhyming is amazing and really works. There are very few who can rhyme, and even fewer who can rhyme well. Liz |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never seen anything quite like this. It's brilliant. ~Heart of the Sword |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was really good! I wish I could write like this! It was so sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good. the sound of the river works so calming, just thought I should say that |