|Reviews for Right for Me|
| SilentStrength chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Is this about zach? sorry if it's not, cuz I don't know about any other guys in your life. heheheh. I've got some new poems up. The Eye contact one is about this "Kim" girl I met at a party last weekend.
| joyfulmusician chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
wow...i REALLY got into the end...the lines starting with "no love isn't blind" short lines are my preference-especially for this kind of poem. it's hard to get long lines that really connect...which is what i was seeing at the beginning...i think the whole poem would be more connected if you either found a way to shorten some of those lines in fht 1st part, or took some out...*smile* but it's a very sweet sad story...i can seriously relate to it! (believe me) oh and one more thing...i think that it'd be a nice poem with just the first few lines and the last lines i mentioned up there...it's almost like you threw the other lines in there from another poem...but you should certainly keep working on it!