Reviews for The Sunrise
Happy-Platipus chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
Whoa this is really really good...
I love the questions throughout the poem, and then the conclusion at the end.
I really like the lines: 'Wake up today' and'Take it into your eyes'.
They show us how when we are depressed we ignore all the good things in the world.
Great poem!
Granite Claws chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Yay, its not depressing!
tainted mind chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
omg...beautiful! insightful too. i really love that...
Chikemuri chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
nice... odd, but nice. i like the imagry a lot.. and fyi, i have lots of other poems... hint hint... _~;;
joyfulmusician chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
your poem has a lot of feeling(AND i do really like it)...but something i noticed...it wasn't really CONNECTED... the rhythm was different so that certain sections flowed (and i REALLY liked those) but certain sections just didn't fit. email me if you want me to tell you the ones i thought were ackward...but overall, i thought it was very...real