Reviews for You can still be mine
AnnaSun chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Hi,

This is good.

Thanks for shairng :)
Yaviewen chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Also very awesome. The way it repeats makes me think of song lyrics.
Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
Good rhythm here.
wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
Fantastic. It rhymes perfectly, and really conveys emotional despair.

I thought it was powerful and meaningful.

Please review some of my stuff if you get the chance.