|Reviews for You can still be mine|
| AnnaSun chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
This is good.
Thanks for shairng :)
| Yaviewen chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Also very awesome. The way it repeats makes me think of song lyrics.
| Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
Good rhythm here.
| wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/15/2003
Fantastic. It rhymes perfectly, and really conveys emotional despair.
I thought it was powerful and meaningful.
Please review some of my stuff if you get the chance.