Reviews for Paradise
LucifersDarkChild chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
aw! its sweet!
Ten no Kage chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
You know, your poetry is so simple. None of those flowery words or anything. I think that's one difference between you and I Confess. She writes with big words. You're straight-forward.
Chavi West-Wind chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
it is pretty, and really sweet. _ really kinda simple, but that was the point, huh?

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