real nice work..i love the poem its sad and very touching..keep the good work..hope u read my work too and plz tell me what u think of it

Woah! I love this. I don't usually like sappy stuff except when I have a major crush on someone like right now...*coughcough* But this isn't that sappy... Anyways this is so great! I love how you told a story with your poem.

Keep writing

~ionlyliveindreams

Nice poem, very sad though. Well, keep up the good work.