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Lisa Violet chapter 15 . 10/10/2014
Do more Chapters please
Lisa Violet chapter 9 . 10/10/2014
you are forgiven
I have an idea for how Noah can get Cat Matt decides to go out with some other girl Cat happens to be there and sees the whole thing happen or Matt gets drunk goes out with some chick Cat happens to see it and go from there sorry if it isn't good enough of an idea.
Lisa Violet chapter 6 . 10/10/2014
Big time yeah A lot of boys get mad at that fast mainly because they like that girl.
Lisa Violet chapter 3 . 10/10/2014
Lisa Violet chapter 2 . 10/10/2014
Damn oh I love your story so far.
Lisa Violet chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
oh sad losing a mother at a young age made me cry a little that was very deep.
Olive Hudson chapter 15 . 5/2/2006
I love this story! Please update! Please!
whimsical sabotage chapter 15 . 4/23/2006
You can't just leave it off like that...! I've been reading this non-stop and I'm so happy I've had the privelege to read this. The characters are deep, and you really went into each other's realationship. You also made each have an interesting past - and future.

Please continue! ] And thank you for not killing the dad. It's easier when you don't know the characters and they die, ne? (Does that sound harsh...?)

Ok, sorry for babbling! Just wanted to say I REALLY like it.
Indigo chapter 15 . 3/28/2006
Hey! So, I stumbled onto this story... and was thankful for it :) It's well-written with a good storyline, and above all clean (I hate when I have to stop reading a good story b/c of what happens later on). So I'm kinda sad that it wasn't finished, but at least by this last you posted chapter I know what would happen next anyways (so the lack of closure isn't too bad). I don't really know if this will get to you, if you have a new email address now that isn't connected with fictionpress, but I wanted to try anyway and say thanks for putting what you did of the story up. I also wanted to say that if you did ever decide to finish the last bit of the story... you'd have one reader at least. )
Whtfeather chapter 15 . 12/22/2005
Other than a few times you fast fowarded to future without noting in story I thought it was well written. Very adorable plot and characters, it's easy to relate too. I appreciate that you kept it 'real' and not something 'fairy tale-ish'. Will definately be watching for the updates.
anon chapter 15 . 10/5/2005
Update soon. PLEASE!
Hell's first Icicle chapter 15 . 9/10/2005
aw so sweet
InspirASIAN chapter 15 . 8/12/2005
that's it...? i know that's it but...but...that was so sweet! i loved it!
InspirASIAN chapter 14 . 8/12/2005 sweet.
InspirASIAN chapter 12 . 8/12/2005
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