Wow! You updated. This is so amazing. Too bad we don't see Mina here but that is all right. Even though the detectives are cunning, I think Stephen and Dominic have some tricks of their own. I can't wait to read more of Mina. Thank you for updating and please write more.

I was starting to think you'd died, it'd been so long since you'd updated. . I love this story. Poor Mina... Stephen is starting to grow on me too. Please update sooner!

YOU DIDN'T FINISH!

Lol,I think Dominic is a very inteesting ,I enjoy reading this story.I found it captivating and nothing original,another word creative.

I’m a great fan of your and always look forward to reading your work. I have just stumbled… come across this story and I am so into it. It’s really good so far, really interesting. Great Story and look forward to more… soon. Good Luck

Hi! Great story. This is really getting too complicated. On one hand, we all want Mina to be free. But, with the secuirty in Baxter's house, that would be almost impossible. I don't know how this would end but please surprise us. Maybe I should stick to reading Roman Enlightenment and Sabine Woman. Please, please update. Thanks!

You are like, never going to update, are you? Please, or at least send a notice telling us why you aren't updating. Thanx.

update! plz? pretty plz?

This is an amazing story. Full of suspense, wit, and sexuality. After reading this for several times and looking for updates, I joined your email listing. Ha! Now I know that Dominic did do something to Stephen's pets before. This intrigues me so much.

I was also thinking of some possible situations. Like Mina having her period or she suffers from withdrawal symptoms. All I know is that you'll probably make the story very surprising.

So please, please update.

This last part is so funny. Dominic hiding his face using Mina's panty? I probably read this story at least five times. I'm so psycho. Stephen is so cold and calculating but unusual. I'm rooting for Stephen and Dominic, but I hope Mina escapes and gives them their just revenge.

this is getting better. please update. yeah, i also read sabine woman and it's really great.

Axel has a sever "knight in shining armor complex" But he rocks anyways. He reminds me of my mom's boyfreind, he used to be one of the company playboys, him and Bruce...but they weren't security guards, they worked in the warehouse. Oh well.

Stephen is creepy and his sidekick is even worse. They should be dragged through the 9 infernos of hell with their faces in the mud...fire actually, but whatever!

Update soon!

I just recently started reading this story, and I really enjoy it. Your stories are always well written and you change the points of view enough so I don't get bored. Thanks, and keep up the good work.

Are you ever going to update? This is sick and twisted, but I must admitt, I like it. SO please, please keep writting. It's geting good. He's a sociopath, whats that?

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