Please come back and finish this story.

Hi, I would like to know if you have finished the story it is really good, one of the best i have read.

Wow! Stephen is such a strong character, it's weird, I'm at differences with him. About Mina, I love that she is strong and unpredictable, hopefully she doesn't lose that about her and the cops find her soon enough. What I hope for the most is that you will finish this story one day, as it is one of the most gripping suspense stories I have read on this site.

Wow, this reminds me of American Psycho

Omg!

Stephen, that son of a gun! He doesn't think that they have him on check, but oh boy is he WRONG!

Oh, you need to update!

XOXO

It's finished? Oh my gosh,, I'm soo creeped out, D: Great story and great everything! The only thing I didnt like about it is the plain creepiness about it,, but without that it wouldn't have been a great story,, makes me want- NEED to act with caution now,, I hope Mina got out, I think you should've done the Minnie character more into the story,, First I thought the Mina was gonna be Minnie, but yeah,, I feel soo sad for all those people, I can't imagine this really happening,,.

I know it can be irritating when people ask you to continue after so long, and I'm not going to ask. :) I just wanted to tell you that I've re-read this story way too many times to be healthy, along with most of your other stuff, back since - oh, man. Since I had WebTV.

I hope you're still writing! :D

I just finished reading what was written on this story so far. It's very good...Stephen is so disturbing! I hope you continue writing this story one day. I would like to see how it turns out. Thanks for the entertainment!

fantastic

most captipating

and i have to ask why keep waiting to update

it s been 3 ALMOST 4 years now

TBC is a mighty possibility

i like mina .

although she seems to bend in pretty nicely

she doesnt loose her personality

Because this is a game, isn't it?" No reply of course. "I don't want to play."

shiver ..

this is like really different

i must admit im kinda now scared of stephan

he is a real freak

no hard to imagine what a twisted mind he has

not to mention all the power , will and determinsation to execute it on poor , unsuspecting mina

you are truly amazing writer !

This is really really good. I love it. I think, though, that you need to write more about Mina... just a suggestion... I love your stories. You're a great writer and I can't wait to read more.

I still can't get over the fact that he masturbated with a butterfly. And that Dominic just stood there. They both have to be really sick people to think that's normal. It really makes me wonder what Dominic does or has done. Vandel mentioned that he did some stuff too, right? With gangs or something? Did he already used to kidnap women before beginning work for Stephen? Because I recall Stephen hiring him because one of the girls killed herself. I guess he's a master of disposing of dead bodies or something.

Anyway. This story is way too realistic. It seems like you've been in the head of a sociopath or something like that. Which is awesome. And also kind of scary, ha. It just shows you've done your research. And I, as well as tons of other people, are impressed.

I'd love it if you'd impress a little bit more by updating. Soon. Within the next few days if possible. Nothing would make my day more.

Oh man I can't believe you stopped here. Just when everything was getting great! Just when I was screaming at my laptop to get the cops to fucking go in there and save Mina! Dominic and Stephen and Mrs Fullham are all nasty pieces of shit and I wouldn't mind if they somehow got "accidentally" shot in the face. Man, I really can't believe that people like that exist.

I somehow had a feeling, even in the beginning, when they were mentioning "pets" that it wouldn't be anything normal. I really can't wait until they save Mina. And that's me hinting that you can't let Mina die. I'm glad she's staying strong after such brutality. Many would break under the pressure. But I guess her attitude is all she has to keep her going.

Please update soon. You stopped at a way too amazing part to just forget about this. But then again, I suppose EVERY part of this story is a good part. Ha.

Come back soon.

Man, this guy is sick. I feel like jumping in the story & telling Mina to RUN. It doesn't make sense that she would accept such an offer though. I thought she'd be more cautious. I guess the prospect of money overshadowed that. I'm almost too scared to continue reading.

Also, he fondles himself WAY too much.

And he's a disgusting creep. :) I commend you for your realistic writing abilities.