That guy gives me the creeps.

You could so be the next Louis Lowry or Mary Higgins Clark.

Finish please. please please please. please. Did I mention please?

love the story you should finish it..

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!XD

please continue this. the way you create you characters is amazing. i really want to see this finished.

I absolutely love love Stephen, I mean he's so crazy but I can't help it, he's like a guilty pleasure. A sociopath nutcase, yes, but I can't help but love him in all of his pyscho-ness. Great job on this one, I hope that you plan on finishing this one.

You, my dear, have an excellent way of writing. The way that you construct your male characters is absolutely amazing. Every time I ever read your stories I find myself taken aback by them and the way that they act and I love it. The things that they say and do are just funny to me, even if the character didn't mean to be funny. I absolutely adore Stephen so far and I can't wait until I get to the latest chapter. Incredible job so far.

I'd bladdy well hope it's going to be continued. There's a certain amount of jouissance in reading this, etre honnet, but I would love to see how it ends.

Are you at all influenced by the book 'The Collector'? I can't remember the name of the author, but the book was about this guy who won the lottery and obsessed over a girl, kidnapped her, also has an obsession with collecting butterflies...I must say that yours is a little more interesting in that you show the investigation team's side as well. The Collector was thoroughly depressing...I hope yours won't be!

This is a pretty impressive prologue. :) You got me hooked!

Hey I was wondering if you based this story off the book The Collector by John Fowles? Because if so, you should probably put a wee disclaimer- though there's enough differences to not make it fanfiction.

This story is brilliant. I found your fiction site and read all of the chapters there, and was overjoyed to find that you'd posted more here. Please, please, please finish this story. I really want to see what's going on between Mina and Stephen right now. All of the detective work is great, obviously, but come on, I'm dying to read about Mina!

And I don't even like het!

What an incredibly neurotic man. Awesome. And the ending with the woman was perfect for the chapter. Loving the story so far.

wow, i just stumbled across this story, and it's absolutely fantastic, you're a brilliant writer, the only thing I can criticize is that sometimes you switch to different parts and people in the story, but don't put a break in between them, so it just suddenly jumps, but apart from from that excellent, I really hope you finish this!

update soon

this needs to be updatedd!