Reviews for Genteel Obsession |
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M M chapter 29 . 3/28/2007 Ooh! An update! Yeah! I know that you have a lot of other stories going, but please finish this one. I really enjoy your stories. |
Lady Katreina chapter 29 . 3/28/2007 Nice. I like how a 'jerk' has become sort of a hero, he's started something. I freaking hope she gets out -intact as much as she could. |
merrymowmow chapter 28 . 1/25/2007 I was wondering when you're going to update. |
cryingelf chapter 1 . 1/17/2007 muhahah! love the story. how is Mina doing in the "jail"? driving herself crazy? does Stephen visit her nightly? UPDATE! |
Tesefel chapter 28 . 1/15/2007 Wow, this story is intense! At the beginning I was afraid that it would end unhappily for the 'good guys,' but the way you turned everything around, including the characters, is really enthralling. I especially like the way in which Axel isn't wholly a creep, and the police aren't apathetic. Great work, and please keep updating! |
M M chapter 28 . 12/29/2006 Wow! I was surprised to see a new chapter. I thought that you had given up on this and on Roman Enlightenment. Well done as always. Add more soon. |
theTwilightPen chapter 6 . 12/16/2006 At first I pondered why this was in the "Thriller" section, since it sounded more like romance than anything else...but now I'm seeing that there is definetely more afoot. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up, TwilightPen |
Lady Katreina chapter 28 . 12/12/2006 "I-am-not-a-GODDAMN butterfly." Woh, Okay so I'm not a sick freak. -most of the time- But you have an AWSOME STORY GOING! OH MY GOSH, YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW AMAZING YOUR STORY IS! -what ever your imagining, it's not even close- Ah, wow. It's difficult thinking that there's more. And it's all locked away in that beautiful scribe brain of yours and the future. Thank you so much for making it. BE STRONG MINA! (Actually I think she's very strong. I envy her strength... just not her situation.) |
EnchantedPhoenix chapter 28 . 12/4/2006 e! I got the author alert in my e-mail. I have alot to do today but I couldn't help pausing everything and reading the next chapter before heading about my day. You have made me SO happy with the update. It is wonderfully done, as always. I love the descriptions of characters and the strong emphasis on their personality. Surprising how little of that one can find these days. If I could hug you, you'd never get me off. Thank you SO much for updating, you have no idea how happy I am! |
Pixel0025 chapter 28 . 12/2/2006 Wooh, I love this story,it's brilliant! I'm so happy that you updated!:D |
emerald chapter 28 . 12/1/2006 Oh wow. I feel sorry for them all. All. Ofcourse some more then others. Anyways awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next! |
Sunny XD chapter 27 . 9/26/2006 You my child are a an ingenious individual and one heck of an author. This story is just...wow, for something on the internet you really don't expect much, however you have proven me wrong, oh so wrong. This really is worthy of publishing and I do think you should go for it because anything could happen. Such as some creepy dude thinking you're a butterfly he can lay claim to. Scary scary man that one, and though his personality scares the living daylights out of me, and if any man existed within this world just like him I would head for the hills, oh wait they do, damn...now where was I? oH yeah. His psyche is very fascinating, character development seems natural as he reveals the crazy man he hides behind his genteel exterior. However as intriguing as he is you must kill him off and that tool Dominic as well, that could be fun. And now in the immortal words of Walter Dash I urge you: You must continue. Ah simple but sweet. oh oh oh I forgot to say Please! So Please! |
anonymous chapter 27 . 3/22/2006 Breathtakingly well written... intriguing to a fault... this is definitely one of your better works and worthy of publication... the plot seems to be split between the crime/investigation scene and Baxter's imprisonment of Mina... this brings up the possibility of using third person limited to create a more suspenseful plot line. What you have here is less action orientated and more character development and depth based. Perhaps this is your style, but occasionally this interrupts the flow of the story. However, this is a fantastic read... and even though you have not worked on this for almost year, I still hope you have the time to finish this morbid yet brilliant plot of yours. |
Bimbo-Trouble chapter 22 . 3/16/2006 wow...its so interesting and the charcaters are not only changing but developing too...great stuff here...keep it up...please... |
miss whoever chapter 27 . 1/10/2006 Ive gotten chills reading this story. Its rather disturbing let me tell you. I still think its great though - great plot, its a good read. You're a really good writer, I hope to read more soon! |