this was a great story. I am realy touched. It is a very sad story, it made me cry since i realy love gryphs. Its a Very well written story and i hope she will find peace, and go to heaven. Keep on wrighting but try to leave eternal suffering. [sobbs]

Very well done!

The pure sorrow and anguish expressed is enough to make any reader wince. A true piece of poetry through intricate description. (there are a few spellings errors though, just to inform ya )

Just because I'm a sucker for happy endings(especially since my novel deals with griffins)...

this could pair up with another short part where she regains her wings...(and finds love & her soul perhaps)

Call me a romantic, but that's my two cents,

Once again, well done!

-ST

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Simply made me sad, depressed and over it all, very broody. I congratulate you on your ability to invoke such emotions with such simple words! I especially was touched by the comparison and analogy between the sparrow and the gryphon. A tiny small link it is, yeah, but it is very significant nonetheless. -

Good work!

I enjooyed it, sad tale of a forgotten hero.
I will read other storys of yours.
one small nit
Last sentence you misspelled soul.

*cry*

Aw... Very nice angsty filled fic of goodness. B ut, it was still very sad, poor Grphy.. '/

Very good, though very short story. I'm a fan of story's like these (Anthropomorphics)

Belle

This is really well written. I could see it! It's so neat! The way you describe things was so powerful and poinant (I don't think I know what that means :}) Anyway it was really good!

~Laura