Reviews for Wingless
the gryphon lover chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
this was a great story. I am realy touched. It is a very sad story, it made me cry since i realy love gryphs. Its a Very well written story and i hope she will find peace, and go to heaven. Keep on wrighting but try to leave eternal suffering. [sobbs]
Sword of the Earth chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Very well done!

The pure sorrow and anguish expressed is enough to make any reader wince. A true piece of poetry through intricate description. (there are a few spellings errors though, just to inform ya )

Just because I'm a sucker for happy endings(especially since my novel deals with griffins)...

this could pair up with another short part where she regains her wings...(and finds love & her soul perhaps)

Call me a romantic, but that's my two cents,

Once again, well done!

Crauth chapter 1 . 4/6/2005

Simply made me sad, depressed and over it all, very broody. I congratulate you on your ability to invoke such emotions with such simple words! I especially was touched by the comparison and analogy between the sparrow and the gryphon. A tiny small link it is, yeah, but it is very significant nonetheless. -

Good work!
vreader chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
I enjooyed it, sad tale of a forgotten hero.
I will read other storys of yours.
one small nit
Last sentence you misspelled soul.
me chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
Twisted Spoon chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Aw... Very nice angsty filled fic of goodness. B ut, it was still very sad, poor Grphy.. '/
Belle the Shadow-Cat chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
Very good, though very short story. I'm a fan of story's like these (Anthropomorphics)

wanequelle chapter 1 . 5/16/2003
This is really well written. I could see it! It's so neat! The way you describe things was so powerful and poinant (I don't think I know what that means :}) Anyway it was really good!