|Reviews for If Only|
| wolfmoon131 chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
hey check out how bored i am! hmm... i have a question... why, in the beginning, does he say, "hi im Lucifer" and then, like, three sentences later, he says it again...? what logic is this?...
you haven't work on this in a while, have you? oh well... OO;
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/19/2003
what? do you anything about Christianity to be writing this? confusing, but dont get in too deep...youre dealing with dark forces
| wolfmoon131 chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
It's very good. I think, since dis is like a journal, you might want to add dates and stuff or something to show more passage of time. i mean, this must have been just at the beginning of time...but...like..i dont know...its just seems like a good idea...how many of my stories HAVE you read?
| S. R. Devaste chapter 1 . 5/16/2003
I like this quite a bit it is uber-cool! Read and reveiw my stories/poetry...specially the ones without reveiws!