Reviews for Exertions
novea21 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Hahahahaha! My fiance all over again.
V chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
::smiles:: cute~
Aidrianna chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
lol that was funny. wonderous.
Ed-the-female chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
dude those things are hard to open! lol ish funny
absolute0 chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
This is interesting. You've captured the excitement and the drama of well, er, opening a pickle jar. )
coat chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
Lol! Funnay
Cattice chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
I don't know your feelings behind this poem or wether it just happened(my excuse for most things) But I like it, I was interested right from the start and searched for a deeper meaning but to find nothing by myself it made me smile, you have definantly made my day.

Morbid Hound chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
LOL! :-D sweet! good rhythm, good punchline. thumbs up!
drawschickens chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
this made me smile