Reviews for Chlorine and Oxygen
Dark Hamadryad chapter 2 . 8/11/2003
Harry defends Ginny and helps raise her self-esteem and she finds herself falling in love with him. Draco then saves his life from Voldemort and Ginny sees him in a new light...Draco/Ginny 4 ever!

Here I go again. Your poems are feeding my HP obsession...which is totally not a bad thing!

~Luna
Dark Hamadryad chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Mamoru makes fun of Usagi, her self-esteem plummets, he pays the price, for he falls in love with her...OR Draco makes fun of Ginny and she begins to loathe him, then he pays the price 'cuz he falls in love with her but she doesn't return his feelings...or does she?

Heh. Sorry about that. Great poem.

~Luna
Not Just a Little Girl chapter 2 . 6/8/2003
Didn't see it coming? I pratically fell off my chair!

Really good though -and i can understand the title a lot more now.

Great work again Sal!
Not Just a Little Girl chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
O interesting **grins**

i love this metaphor, and the ending is like a promise of a death or something... i'm gonna go read the second one..
Silverlight Elf chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
Wow... tell him he's an asshole too! haha! Great poem, very powerful..
The Black Rider chapter 2 . 5/22/2003
God, that was beautiful. I mean, I loved the first one, it was very intense and angsty, but this was just captivating to me.
Davido Martino chapter 2 . 5/22/2003
that's very good. you write very well.

i can' think of anything else to write. well done!
Starlight Rain chapter 2 . 5/21/2003
Interesting metephor. Unique ideas seem to be what categorize your writing most to me .

~~Starlight Rain
ChaoxAngel chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
This is excellent the way you've put it.

~DW
Keep it 100 chapter 2 . 5/17/2003
I didn't see that romance coming, but it was refreshing.

~Heart of the Sword
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
What a great metaphor to use. This really got your message across.

~Heart of the Sword
Blargh213213 chapter 2 . 5/17/2003
I loved your use of poison vs life sustaining. It was great juxtaposition. I really wasn't expecting the love aspect to be thrown in there, but it was a nice touch.
Jimmy Jazz chapter 2 . 5/17/2003
Oh excellent. Brilliant job of working in romance. :)
Jimmy Jazz chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
Wow... the description is wonderful, made me choke myself. Brilliant work.