Reviews for Dreams Falling Away
Baby Milo chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Krista chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
very moving poem. from what i've read of your poems, they all have a really powerful message in them. i'll definetly come back and check your new poems!
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
"Because I'm locked within

your gaze."

Great imagery, very angsty. Loved it, has a nice flow to it and it almost sounds as if it would rhyme. Great job!

cio, hoellenwauwau
Needa S chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Wow... outstanding piece.. I like the way you ended it. Very touching and meaningful! Keep writing..
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
such a nicely worded poem, i like it a lot!
Tusaki Hibiki chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
I love this poem! :) I shall se if I may add it to my favs!
Shebster chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
I liked your poem. One grammar problem though... on the fifth to last line, the "you're" should be "your" because it is showing possession. But otherwise, nice work.