uh, wow. Quality content here. True story.

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this makes me so f-ing jealous of manson now, it's like, damn. why cant he be mine?

Really? Why can't there be more Marilyn slashes like this. I really liked it! The fact that you brought humor into the lemon made me laugh:)

ow just imagine Manson moaning... my brain's gonna blow up!

my god, this was good. I've been jealous of my friend who's found all this slash about orlando bloom etc., and I was looking for one involving Trent! Maynard and Twiggy were a good addition too...so now we REALLY know why he joined APC. :) I hope this continues.

that story was fucking brilliant. u need to write more fics. i mean dat was wow!

wow...that was SO fu* hott..just wow. I need to go find my boyfriend

UPDATEE!

MM. Yummy. Write more Manson fics! Please!

that was very nice it made me very hard

i dunno what to improve it was good

Well this is my first time reading a slash...and I've never even read anything where two guys were going at it, if ya know what I mean, but I was thoroughly impressed, as well as intrigingly turned on. I thought the story was great, but I believe the dialogue in the beginning could be more...in character, or flush (for lack of better words). The rising action and climax (pardon the puns ;)) were well written and I love love to read more slashes by Preciousfilth (and yeah you were right about everybody having to watch gay male porn at least once, I'm definitely gonna try it now lol). I liek the way the characters develop and how the characrts' emotions are portrayed. I don't really know what else to write execpt that i love it!

-Midnight Rain

Cute! They might be a little OOC- but they seem like a good match. Please, carry on...