Reviews for Monochrome
Ren S chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
I really like the way your words flow in this. It's creative, and the writing seems to draw you into this girl's head, and leaves you standing at the exit feeling like you've brought something with ya. Or something like that ::sweatdrop::
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
This was a very good poem, very thoughtful and it flowed really well. I especially liked the second stanza, particularly "eyes on the cross that's near the door: it wasn't hung like that before-" Keep writing :)