Reviews for All I Have
anonomoose chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
this is great. don't hate me for putting this, but i think you should use this as a prologue and write more from when they are older
Jaquard chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
O, nice. This left me all warm and fuzzy inside. A few spelling mistakes here and there. You bring the comfort the characters have with each other well across (which led to the "warm and fuzzy"). Keep it up!
ItalianQT chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
That was really cute! You did an excellent job! : )
Cazzaa chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
I had to review this.
Full of fluff :) a good thing always.
Very sweet.
I liked the 'prono draw', very funny.
Especially liked the last paragraph.
The direct truth, no lies no fluff.
My favorite bit.
Beautifully written.
Sea Temptress chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
That was good, even though first times are never that good and sweet and romantic. But it's a hell of a lot more fun reading about times like that, as if they were. And a random and totally inconsequential thing (at least for stories) that I noticed was that they didn't use condoms, but hey.
iriscristata chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
Wow, that's a great ficlet. Exactly what I was looking for: short, sweet and romantic. Wonderful job.
Angle from Hell chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
This is realy good! I think you should expand on it.

Crystal

(aka Angle from Hell)
fred chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
This was really really really good! i loved it! write more you are a great author!
P.Lin chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
woW...sweet and touching!
RNL chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
aw...thats cute

RNL
Fearless-Sweep-Gurl chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
that's so sweet!
Rainy Summers chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
oh. that is so sweet. : )
Chick chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
Really Really good! I loved it! I am so gonna read more of your stories ;)
annonymos chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
luved it! it was so cute and sweet. Keep writing!
wingedgothpixie00 chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
wow,its a great fic,id love to read the sequel,if there is,im just saying,im sure itll be even better,keep writing,ure good.

peace
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