|Reviews for Mother, My Love|
| Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
This one is so beautifully written and simply true. "For you are a gift so precious to me" That line says it all. I love my mum with all my heart cause she's always there for me.
Great poem! I like it very much!
| Zainab chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Very beautiful. You have a good heart. I like this one with its rhyme. O yeah, I read the beginning of your profile: Japanese music is the best. (I also like French too...)
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
aaww! awesome poem. I love my mom! she's my everything, especially since my dad left (divorce)
| Lady of the Moon chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Wonderful! It expresses the duty we have to our mothers for helping us grow up quite well. In your first line I think you meant to say the palm of your hand. The phrasing you used was very awkward and I could not be quite sure what it was sposed to mean.
Asta Chantrea Orra
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
aw, very sweet and pretty, enjoyed it muchly, nicely done
| greenfroggies chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
Very touching - i totally agree. I don't know what I would do if i lost my mother. Just one point, in the line 'Of old fantasies never unmarred.' it has a double negative. Maybe you meant it to but i think it would work better if it said 'ever unmarred' or 'never marred'.
Loved the poem and will definately check out some of your other stuff.
| The Black Rider chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
A beautiful poem. Honestly, I don't know what I'd do without my mother.
| liquidcrystal chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
this is incredibly sweet. I'd love to write something like this for my mother. anyway... keep writing! :)
| midnight dreams chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
*nods* i needed that reminder. :) yay you. :D
| kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
beautiful.. sweet. keep writing
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
wow, that was stunning! so beautifully written . . . would make a wonderful mother's day card (write to hallmark, they could use a good one ;P). very touching, indeed. the last line, "oh mother without you, i am not me," was lovely - it gave me a little chill. :) my other favorite lines were "you lure sunshine into my life," and "you dabbed my world with brilliant hues." just gorgeous. kudos!
| Needa S chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
This was beautiful! And your note is so true for everyday goes by I miss my mother. Excellent job!
| wonky donkey chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
Wow this was really good.
It makes me feel bad for the way I treat my mom.
I really like the lines"you lure sunshine into my life", "brim the world with love and care"
| chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
Yeah, very true. A bautifully written poem indeed.
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
awesome poem! very sweet, and a nice reminder we all need to have once in a while. nice job on this! keep on writing!