Reviews for Fading
TravisE.V chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
This makes me wan't to tell you somethin'...If you need to talk to someone...Just get on an Inuyasha chatzone...Look for TravisE.V. and I'll help you...I may only be 13,but you can talk to me about anything,and I promise to listen...My Friend.
Desert Wrath chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
Gosh, your writing in this one was extremely deep,just like your other works. I'm sorry you have to go through so much pain... As always, continue writing!
nightmareslost chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Eh, I've felt that way too. Odd, many awesome writers (such as yourself, for example) describe my life often very well. hmph. Anyway, very ..emotional. Strong... lots of power.

~Nightmareslost
xunwellchildx chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
great poem keep up the good work

xunwellchildx
Xi chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
i could really imagine everything... great work!
kirsten was chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
This is one of the most powerful poems I have ever read in my entire life. I love the part about the blood on the floor. This one is going on my favorites. Thank you.
Imoen chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
I understand and can completly relate to every word in this poem. This was bloody amazing.
Damaged chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Yes, cutting is a good way to let everything out...
Porphyrophobic Grape chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
this is good, sad, but good, keep writing
Isarandel chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
nice poem... cheer up... you have only one life. /if you die, nothing will change. but you can change something if you live on/ :)
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Oh, wow... Brilliant, very moving.
x-Crying-X-Inside-x chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
That was so beautiful, I've written several suicide poems if you want to read them, the links are on my profile. But the thing is, most of thouse poems are dark and depressing. I got more out of this one, it was dark and lovely. Keep writing, x-Crying-X-Inside-x
SpilledInk chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
very moving, as I said before. do you really feel this way? if you do, don't. your rwriting is great and you may have something here. :)

SpiLLeD InK