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![]() ![]() This makes me wan't to tell you somethin'...If you need to talk to someone...Just get on an Inuyasha chatzone...Look for TravisE.V. and I'll help you...I may only be 13,but you can talk to me about anything,and I promise to listen...My Friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh, your writing in this one was extremely deep,just like your other works. I'm sorry you have to go through so much pain... As always, continue writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, I've felt that way too. Odd, many awesome writers (such as yourself, for example) describe my life often very well. hmph. Anyway, very ..emotional. Strong... lots of power. ~Nightmareslost |
![]() ![]() great poem keep up the good work xunwellchildx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i could really imagine everything... great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the most powerful poems I have ever read in my entire life. I love the part about the blood on the floor. This one is going on my favorites. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I understand and can completly relate to every word in this poem. This was bloody amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, cutting is a good way to let everything out... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good, sad, but good, keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice poem... cheer up... you have only one life. /if you die, nothing will change. but you can change something if you live on/ :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow... Brilliant, very moving. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so beautiful, I've written several suicide poems if you want to read them, the links are on my profile. But the thing is, most of thouse poems are dark and depressing. I got more out of this one, it was dark and lovely. Keep writing, x-Crying-X-Inside-x |
![]() ![]() ![]() very moving, as I said before. do you really feel this way? if you do, don't. your rwriting is great and you may have something here. :) SpiLLeD InK |