Reviews for Smithereens
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
This is very sad. I love the last line.
Lux's Confusion chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
the imagry here was vivid in your vague way, but i was seeing it, the doll. it reminded me of the movie A.I. for some reason. i like how you wrote about the charater as a once vibrant being and as her heart broke, so did the rest of her body. i just had an image of the doll among miles and miles of shards from other broken dolls. the ending was definently the best part. great great job. i can't seem to say that enough!

very cool, hun.

Jasmine
iridium chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
extremely well written. :)
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
Wow, talent in motion! This is really touching and intence!

CoolBeans18s
tahayov chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
oh this is a real touching poem..it reminds me of my work :)..anyway great job..i d realy hope u would read my stuff and review them
PlayMateMisfit chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
i like this, i can relate, it's pretty general, but has alot of metafors-spelt wrong, sorry-. keep thoughts on paper

misfit
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
You really do have a talent. This was so intense and just so awesome. I don't know what else to say.

Heart of the Sword