Reviews for Blue Sequins
chickadee chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
the line "don't turn to me cause i won't even remember your name" is just...killer. i love it.
Traced In Green chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
Another great song! I loved it!

luvs

*RiotGirlGC33*
Raistlin-The Dark One chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Hmm..that's quite dramatic. I can almost hear the tune to this in my head. Great poem. I like how you switch between rhyme and free verse.
Liller chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
as always, wonderfully wonderful - you're very good at writing song lyrics. it ends on a nice note. confusing line, though: "as long as i'm here they'll always be a chance" did you mean "there will always be a chance"?
InkedinSin chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
i like the second part of this song, nicely done.
Wrong Name Tag chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
Pretty good, although I don't think it's as well written as some your others. Still pretty good, shows a kind of ; good job.

Jess
Needa S chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
Aww sad..and meanigul! Great job.. Keep writing..
not sure yet chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
interesting, sad yet not, more of a moving on piece, enjoyed it muchly though, very nice and has a good flow to it, excellent job!
TragedyLovesMisery chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
I really like this. Good job!
Archetype Revolutionary chapter 1 . 5/20/2003
Very deep, good use of dramatic repetition!