|Reviews for Pain|
| Needa S chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
God does help us through our sorriws. I know for I lost my mother and dad but Heaven was their gain. I'm sorry for your loss. You did a great job putting this together. I think your friend would have been proud. God Bless!
| CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
Well written. You use 'floor' a lot, but that doesn't matter. Nice job!
| liquidcrystal chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
aw... and i really am saying that with geniuine sympathy.
it's good that you can write to release your grief. this is a heartfelt poem. keep writing.
[ tentative :-) ]
| Summer1 chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
Vivid. Lots of visions while reading. :) Sad too.
| TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
its painful 2 lose sum1...especailly wen their close 2 u...