Reviews for Pain
Needa S chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
God does help us through our sorriws. I know for I lost my mother and dad but Heaven was their gain. I'm sorry for your loss. You did a great job putting this together. I think your friend would have been proud. God Bless!
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
Well written. You use 'floor' a lot, but that doesn't matter. Nice job!

~ CoolBeans18s
liquidcrystal chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
aw... and i really am saying that with geniuine sympathy.

it's good that you can write to release your grief. this is a heartfelt poem. keep writing.

[ tentative :-) ]
Summer1 chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
Vivid. Lots of visions while reading. :) Sad too.
TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
its painful 2 lose sum1...especailly wen their close 2 u...