Reviews for All In Tatters
Tanin chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Aiya, like plot! _...Aeonya is a nice name, it feels as though I've found a fellow namenist! Congrats you are one of them lol! I'm going to read all this slow so hold a few days so I can read it all!
Tanin
SwanSong chapter 11 . 2/20/2004
oh my gosh... I love this story! you must write more... please...
No pun intended of course...
Anyway, great job... Keep up the good work...
And for heaven's sake update!
NekoKaji chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
Neko: Oh... O.O; This is intense! Kao is evil!

Tanaka: Hey... I like this guy! *grins smugly* He reminds me of... well... me! XP

Neko: *rolls eyes* Of course he does! You're just as much an evil twit as any...

Tanaka: Ha! At least I'm not obsessed with japanese guys! P

Neko: O. Okay! THAT'S IT! THAT ONE HIT A NERVE! COME ON WOLF BOY! *puts up her paws and begins to sucker punch the air in front of Tanaka*

Tanaka: *puts a hand on Neko's head as she attacks him, holding her back* Silly kitty... trixs are for kids! -

Neko: *folds arms and growls* U.U; Stupid canine...

Anyways, thank you for listening to my rambles! Hugs and snuggles! . Toodles Moose-chan!
Trinity of Dreams chapter 11 . 9/5/2003
Right, ok, loved it!
Trinity of Dreams chapter 6 . 9/5/2003
Aeon and Ruki
Alana Hikari-chan chapter 11 . 8/27/2003
Oh... Poor little Kao-chan... Poor little Damien-chan... v_v

Well, this is great! And I vote... er... Well, once I thought Aeon/Ruki, but I feel so sorry for Kao... But definately Dante/Damien! _;;

Ja ne,

Alana

"Oui caa?"
daakukitsune chapter 11 . 8/23/2003
_ Yes my new name! o_o everything is now this name... this thingy... name thingy.. e-mail.. O_o

XD;;

I don't care if it is a drug! STORY! W00T! STORY! _

e.e no he didn't... then again he's still there... o_O people beside my locker think I'm hording a midget. o_X

T_T lucky Aeon...

I know! I shall kidnapp AEON! YES! THEN KAO WILL BE MINE! BWHAHAHAHAHA! THEN WHEN I HAVE AEON I'LL... I'll... I don't know yet but I'll do it!

*shocked*

O_O...

KISS? _ I WILL GET YOU AEON!

Aw.. poor Damien. ;-;

RUKI! RESCUE AEON! GET HER AWAY FROM KAO! SHE'S CORRUPTING HIM I TELL YOU! X_x

Kao lose. NOO!

wait.. if he loses, Aeon leaves.. YAY! LOSE KAO! LOSE!

Aww I love Kao's sappyness idiocy..ness.. ;

third person! yay!

aw... that's so kawaii...

._.

aw... poor Kao.. wait.. WHO'S CRAZY?

wait.. where did that sandwhich come from? *thinks*

*flashback*

*6 months ago*

Kit: sandwhich!

Bell: *rings*

Kit: o_o NOO! no time for sandwhich! *puts it in locker next to her stick*

*next day*

Kit: *thinking* I thought left something in here... STICK! *takes her stick out* must not be important. *leaves*

*End Flashback*

o_o

Uh-oh...

KAO DON'T EAT IT! Ok I LOVED YOUR STORY! IT'S SO ADDICTING. -

Now I must go break into my school and save Kao from eating a bad sandwhich... then I get to kidnap Aeon.

I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE! BYE!

*runs out*

... *pause*

*runs back in* Oh YEAH! AEON/TOKETSU! Ok long review.. e.e
seilann chapter 11 . 8/22/2003
Well, it's certainly... spontaneous... _ I know, I'm such a dork... and I'm a creative writing major, too! Baka na watashi!

Not a bad Chappie... sometimes you can cheat on the length by adding unneccessary detail, or saying something twice but in a different way... metaphors, syntax, all that good stuff.

Anyway, I'm willing to pay for Kao if it's neccessary! I have... five bucks and a jar of... buttons? Heheh... I need a bloody job...

my, a rather... sane... review. I think I'll go eat candy now.
daakukitsune preveiously kawaiikitsune chapter 10 . 8/21/2003
Oh yeah I forgot! Aeon/Toketsu! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XP

Yes... KAO IS MINE!

T-T Well, actually no... BUT THAT STOP ME FROM KIDNAPPING HIM! MWHAHAHAHA *cough cough* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH *hack hack* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *hyperventilating*

_ Ok, no more cackling...

Yeah ok. I kidnap Kao... AEON STAY BACK! I HAVE A STCIK! I REPEAT I HAVE A STICK! XDD

Yes! AEON/TOKETSU OR RUKI!

IF Aeon married Kao wouldn't that mean the end of the world? o_O;;

Yeah ok... MUST FINISH EVIL HOMEWORK!

And I tink I left Kao in my locker... o_o; he won't be happy... XP

Ok! Well bye! AND UPDATE SOON! NEED STORY! XP Yeah ok bye! *waves*
The Merle Goddess chapter 10 . 8/19/2003
OK... What is Kao doing in Aeon's bed in the middle of the night? He wasn't the one making her scream was he? *shiver* S-she's not going to get pregnant right? Ow... this is staining my poor, pure mind. Hmm oh well, I still love your story!
The Merle Goddess chapter 10 . 8/19/2003
Finally you put up a new chapter! Gr You're slow! And make your chapters longer so I can read more! Pleasse
seilann chapter 10 . 8/15/2003
*in shock* *no, really, Chippie didn't expect that last one*

What can I say? I need more, Gamnit! Kao is well... sweet, like you said!

*Melty eyes* Hey, can I have one? Either Kao or Toketsu!
daakukitsune preveiously kawaiikitsune chapter 10 . 8/15/2003
XD Great chapter! Also I liked the new chapter 3 beginning part, thing! XP

*falls to her knees her arms up in the air in a dramatic pose, the spotlight thingy on her*

NO!

KAO!

T_T

*sniff* Aeon is so lucky..

*cries*

O_o we all get weird moods. I started cackling in my algebra class for no reason today. I feel out of my chair. XD

o.o; Go Ruki...

o nighty nighty time! -

T-T Why does Aeon get them all? KAO! AND Toketsu! *mumbles* Lucky fiction character...

! *deranged sing song voice* _ I am losing more of my sanity everday! I blame the school! o_o;;

O_o it would be hard for someone to kiss someone else with a dog muzzle... er... the penguin kiss? You know the nose kiss thingy? x_X;

o long review! _ and semi-pointless! I can't wait for your next chapter! _
Yami chapter 9 . 8/4/2003
Good. I hope you update soon. This is a really good story. I vote Aeon/Roruki.
kawaiikitsune chapter 9 . 7/22/2003
TOKESTSU IS ALIVE! ALIVE! HE LIIVEESS AGAIN! DANTE KISSED DAMIEN! YAY! ABOUT TIME!

AND MY CAPS LOCK IS ON!

I loved the chapter! He's not deadd! It's a miracle!

I think. o.รด Can I vote again? If so I put another vote for Aeon/Toketsu! I WILL OUTVOTE YOU ALL BY ME! BWHAHAHA!

THAT MADE NO SENSE!

Oh yeah. I VOTE FOR DAMIEN/DANTE TOO! Shouen-ai isn't bad. o.O As long as it's not weird. O.o;; then it's scary.

*glomps Kao, again* He is no longer a scary homicidal person.. thing... erm.. ALTERNATE DIMENSION person! YEAH!

Anyhos, I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S GREAT!

O, long reveiw. v well, I must be going now! I can't wait for your next chapter! Ja! *waves and walks off with a tied and gagged Kao*
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