|Reviews for All In Tatters|
| Tanin chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
Aiya, like plot! _...Aeonya is a nice name, it feels as though I've found a fellow namenist! Congrats you are one of them lol! I'm going to read all this slow so hold a few days so I can read it all!
| SwanSong chapter 11 . 2/20/2004
oh my gosh... I love this story! you must write more... please...
No pun intended of course...
Anyway, great job... Keep up the good work...
And for heaven's sake update!
| NekoKaji chapter 1 . 11/3/2003
Neko: Oh... O.O; This is intense! Kao is evil!
Tanaka: Hey... I like this guy! *grins smugly* He reminds me of... well... me! XP
Neko: *rolls eyes* Of course he does! You're just as much an evil twit as any...
Tanaka: Ha! At least I'm not obsessed with japanese guys! P
Neko: O. Okay! THAT'S IT! THAT ONE HIT A NERVE! COME ON WOLF BOY! *puts up her paws and begins to sucker punch the air in front of Tanaka*
Tanaka: *puts a hand on Neko's head as she attacks him, holding her back* Silly kitty... trixs are for kids! -
Neko: *folds arms and growls* U.U; Stupid canine...
Anyways, thank you for listening to my rambles! Hugs and snuggles! . Toodles Moose-chan!
| Trinity of Dreams chapter 11 . 9/5/2003
Right, ok, loved it!
| Trinity of Dreams chapter 6 . 9/5/2003
Aeon and Ruki
| Alana Hikari-chan chapter 11 . 8/27/2003
Oh... Poor little Kao-chan... Poor little Damien-chan... v_v
Well, this is great! And I vote... er... Well, once I thought Aeon/Ruki, but I feel so sorry for Kao... But definately Dante/Damien! _;;
| daakukitsune chapter 11 . 8/23/2003
_ Yes my new name! o_o everything is now this name... this thingy... name thingy.. e-mail.. O_o
I don't care if it is a drug! STORY! W00T! STORY! _
e.e no he didn't... then again he's still there... o_O people beside my locker think I'm hording a midget. o_X
T_T lucky Aeon...
I know! I shall kidnapp AEON! YES! THEN KAO WILL BE MINE! BWHAHAHAHAHA! THEN WHEN I HAVE AEON I'LL... I'll... I don't know yet but I'll do it!
KISS? _ I WILL GET YOU AEON!
Aw.. poor Damien. ;-;
RUKI! RESCUE AEON! GET HER AWAY FROM KAO! SHE'S CORRUPTING HIM I TELL YOU! X_x
Kao lose. NOO!
wait.. if he loses, Aeon leaves.. YAY! LOSE KAO! LOSE!
Aww I love Kao's sappyness idiocy..ness.. ;
third person! yay!
aw... that's so kawaii...
aw... poor Kao.. wait.. WHO'S CRAZY?
wait.. where did that sandwhich come from? *thinks*
*6 months ago*
Kit: o_o NOO! no time for sandwhich! *puts it in locker next to her stick*
Kit: *thinking* I thought left something in here... STICK! *takes her stick out* must not be important. *leaves*
KAO DON'T EAT IT! Ok I LOVED YOUR STORY! IT'S SO ADDICTING. -
Now I must go break into my school and save Kao from eating a bad sandwhich... then I get to kidnap Aeon.
I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE! BYE!
*runs back in* Oh YEAH! AEON/TOKETSU! Ok long review.. e.e
| seilann chapter 11 . 8/22/2003
Well, it's certainly... spontaneous... _ I know, I'm such a dork... and I'm a creative writing major, too! Baka na watashi!
Not a bad Chappie... sometimes you can cheat on the length by adding unneccessary detail, or saying something twice but in a different way... metaphors, syntax, all that good stuff.
Anyway, I'm willing to pay for Kao if it's neccessary! I have... five bucks and a jar of... buttons? Heheh... I need a bloody job...
my, a rather... sane... review. I think I'll go eat candy now.
| daakukitsune preveiously kawaiikitsune chapter 10 . 8/21/2003
Oh yeah I forgot! Aeon/Toketsu! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XP
Yes... KAO IS MINE!
T-T Well, actually no... BUT THAT STOP ME FROM KIDNAPPING HIM! MWHAHAHAHA *cough cough* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH *hack hack* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *hyperventilating*
_ Ok, no more cackling...
Yeah ok. I kidnap Kao... AEON STAY BACK! I HAVE A STCIK! I REPEAT I HAVE A STICK! XDD
Yes! AEON/TOKETSU OR RUKI!
IF Aeon married Kao wouldn't that mean the end of the world? o_O;;
Yeah ok... MUST FINISH EVIL HOMEWORK!
And I tink I left Kao in my locker... o_o; he won't be happy... XP
Ok! Well bye! AND UPDATE SOON! NEED STORY! XP Yeah ok bye! *waves*
| The Merle Goddess chapter 10 . 8/19/2003
OK... What is Kao doing in Aeon's bed in the middle of the night? He wasn't the one making her scream was he? *shiver* S-she's not going to get pregnant right? Ow... this is staining my poor, pure mind. Hmm oh well, I still love your story!
| The Merle Goddess chapter 10 . 8/19/2003
Finally you put up a new chapter! Gr You're slow! And make your chapters longer so I can read more! Pleasse
| seilann chapter 10 . 8/15/2003
*in shock* *no, really, Chippie didn't expect that last one*
What can I say? I need more, Gamnit! Kao is well... sweet, like you said!
*Melty eyes* Hey, can I have one? Either Kao or Toketsu!
| daakukitsune preveiously kawaiikitsune chapter 10 . 8/15/2003
XD Great chapter! Also I liked the new chapter 3 beginning part, thing! XP
*falls to her knees her arms up in the air in a dramatic pose, the spotlight thingy on her*
*sniff* Aeon is so lucky..
O_o we all get weird moods. I started cackling in my algebra class for no reason today. I feel out of my chair. XD
o.o; Go Ruki...
o nighty nighty time! -
T-T Why does Aeon get them all? KAO! AND Toketsu! *mumbles* Lucky fiction character...
! *deranged sing song voice* _ I am losing more of my sanity everday! I blame the school! o_o;;
O_o it would be hard for someone to kiss someone else with a dog muzzle... er... the penguin kiss? You know the nose kiss thingy? x_X;
o long review! _ and semi-pointless! I can't wait for your next chapter! _
| Yami chapter 9 . 8/4/2003
Good. I hope you update soon. This is a really good story. I vote Aeon/Roruki.
| kawaiikitsune chapter 9 . 7/22/2003
TOKESTSU IS ALIVE! ALIVE! HE LIIVEESS AGAIN! DANTE KISSED DAMIEN! YAY! ABOUT TIME!
AND MY CAPS LOCK IS ON!
I loved the chapter! He's not deadd! It's a miracle!
I think. o.ô Can I vote again? If so I put another vote for Aeon/Toketsu! I WILL OUTVOTE YOU ALL BY ME! BWHAHAHA!
THAT MADE NO SENSE!
Oh yeah. I VOTE FOR DAMIEN/DANTE TOO! Shouen-ai isn't bad. o.O As long as it's not weird. O.o;; then it's scary.
*glomps Kao, again* He is no longer a scary homicidal person.. thing... erm.. ALTERNATE DIMENSION person! YEAH!
Anyhos, I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S GREAT!
O, long reveiw. v well, I must be going now! I can't wait for your next chapter! Ja! *waves and walks off with a tied and gagged Kao*