Reviews for Wind
Stoffpferd chapter 3 . 7/13/2003
Cool, I liked that collection, although I don't really know much about types of wind. I enjoyed reading it! Well done!

liquor knight chapter 3 . 7/9/2003
and just 3...?

liquor knight chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
hell. you really meant haiku when you said it.

Damn short.

Too damn short.


this is not a flame :)
Moril chapter 3 . 7/3/2003
The only possible improvement to this that I could suggest is changing "mini" to "tiny" - alliteration often enhances the feel of a "fun" poem, which I believe this is intended to be.

Otherwise, it's as excellent as the others!
Moril chapter 2 . 7/3/2003
You seem to be fond of the word "ephemeral." Another masterpiece.
Moril chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
This is a great poem, again! You ar an excellent poet - I do a bit of haiku myself and this is excellent.
PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife chapter 3 . 6/28/2003
hehehe...the 3rd one was cute (i couldnt find a better way to wor dit) and i really liked the wording on the 2nd one,great job on the haikus!
blessed-goddess chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Because of your gorgeous review I had 2 review one of urs...if I havnt already! Perhaps this one should of been called Tornado...but u called it wind...oh im confusing myself!
ALK214 chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
Great haiku. I like it.
InkedinSin chapter 3 . 6/4/2003
hehe...liked the 3d one a lot.
SerAnonima chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
blinkie chapter 3 . 5/31/2003 cute! they're having fun! _
blinkie chapter 2 . 5/31/2003
going great! i dont know what a zephyr feels like though. If it hit me in the face I wouldnt know it was a zephyr O.o. But it's very good haiku!
blinkie chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
nice haiku! and very true too. _
Smoky Bear chapter 3 . 5/31/2003
nice haikus
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