Reviews for Daddy
Qu33n of Spades chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
I know where you're coming from. Of course, this is how I feel about my brother, but... yeah. I don't know what to say. This is really moving, really good...
IpsoFacto chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
God, I'm crying. Is that true? That really was yours?
Eulogy of the Scorned chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
I like this. Just remember: "I kill you to love you." - Slipknot, "Iowa"
sos chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
This is so raw and deep. i commend you. You did a brillaint job, it sounds so true and real. I really have to say, putting your deepest secrets for everyone to see takes balls. It's an amazing poem. I really really like it. sos
Icefallenangel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
OMG! I feel the exact same way about someone! I can totally relate- awesome work!
I Am Faithless chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
I liked this, got an odd sort of rhythym but thats part of what i liked about it. Keep up the good work!
nekosuke chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
I liked this poem, it was great written and able to display the characters feeling, love it, write more
Eowyn1 chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
Very powerful portrayal of torn feelings. Very well written.
Mark-777 chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
I... I don't really know what to say to this one...

It's breathtaking...
La Luna Mia chapter 1 . 5/21/2003
wonderfully written! great emotion, i was held encaptured through the whole thing! the change in ideas and feelings was so realistic and so perfectly protrayed. the use of "Daddy" instead of "father" or "dad" or "papa" was perfect. the last lined summed the whole thing up. it was abosolutly spectacular.