|Reviews for Saltwater|
| pablothepollboy2003 chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
oke i told the other person you must have no life and must be really lonely. look is the poem really about salt water or about yourself/ it sounds like you want to commit suicide or something because no one likes you. look just look at your peom and tell us what they mean to you.
| idbit chapter 1 . 5/22/2003
Your poems are okay, but i don't see any depth in any of them. When you write poetry on life or spititual do not focus on "yourself" so much. You have to have some kind of deep meaning in them so that the reader could understand more about life in general. What I'm saying is put some kind of theme in it so it has some kind of message about life to peope. And try other stylistic devices not just simple similes.