|Reviews for Up A Ladder of Lightbulbs|
| Cookiemonster chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
I think it has a very interesting title and it draws you in with the uniqueness of the idea of stepping on lightbulbs. I wonder how you came up with the idea.
If I knew more about the form I'd say you did well fitting it, but I notice that you do well with the repeating of lines at the right places
| Lady of Pluto chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
I like it, but I can't really concentrate with you talking so loudly, but it's good
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
fascinating . . . i've never seen this format before, but i like it a lot! took me a minute to figure it out, but now that i see the pattern WOW this must've been hard to write, it's SO GOOD. how did you ever manage to get a concept through AND make it sound so beautiful AND stick to the format? you're amazing! the title snagged me right off the bat. favorite lines were: "[the ambitious go] up a ladder of lightbulbs," "because lightbulbs break when stepped on," and "shattered minds are useless." truly breathtaking. i think this may be my favorite piece of yours. awesome job!