|Reviews for Dearly Beloved|
| T.Whittman chapter 6 . 8/10/2012
Hm seemed like a good story but things went way to fast and seemed unreal sorry but why would he invite someone to there house when they first met instead of like a library.? Gona stop reading here but like this story idea just feel there should be more space between each event.
| Morpheus' Beloved chapter 39 . 6/28/2012
i loved this chapter tho i find Nate a lil overdramatic
| SmileyfaceGurl chapter 6 . 6/18/2012
I luv it. This is Effin Spaztastic.
| sunny-california chapter 59 . 3/22/2012
:'( honestly I really started tearing up when nate died after that is that like adding salt to a wound you stated killing off all these awesome characters. Idk but couldnt there have been a surprising twist ending where in actually nate , jake, mat, and sean were really vampires? Really good story though. One of my favorites.
| Opalstar45 chapter 63 . 1/6/2012
I cried at the end of this. So sad
| Opalstar45 chapter 41 . 1/4/2012
Random, but in Spanish 1, one of my words is bloquear (means to block) but if you try to say it in english, it kinda makes you think of this book... just something kinda funny I though of :P. Good job so far!
| Opalstar45 chapter 35 . 1/3/2012
I first thought you had mixed up the charecters until I read the note at the bottom of the page... Its awesome so far.
| john from cali chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
one of my favorite stories. Love
| HideAndGoSeek chapter 30 . 9/7/2011
I feel like you should know and appreciate the severity of my love for this story. Most chapters bring back really bad memories...you know the ones that make you flinch every time you remember them or the topic is brought up? Yeah those. But because your writing and this story are so super fantastical, I keep reading and flinching.
I just thought you should know that your story is so amazing that I put up with horrible memories and feelings almost every chapter just to read it. It's just that amazing.
Now that you know, I'm going to keep reading. *smiles*
| Alex Dark chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
The chapters are too short. I knew that Rich was gonnna do something fucked up. Anyways ...
I'll just keep reading.
| Alex Dark chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I realized I had favourited this and not reviewed it. I read it and liked it a lot. I hate Rich though ...
I want to know more about what's going on ...
I guess I will figure it out when I read the rest ...
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/25/2011
YOU BITCH(ES). I WAS REREADING THIS, AND I STILL FELL FOR IT. .
| Adam-1D chapter 43 . 8/4/2011
I love this story. And yay, I'm reviewer #1313! :D
| Lady of Crimson chapter 61 . 7/8/2011
So, I already reveiwed the last two chapters so I'm writing someting here.
I just had a dream about Sean and Matt that I just really wanted to tell! It looked like I was reading it on fictionpress in my dream but I dont think this actually happened.
So(This is what happened and not the words written in the dream in my head):
Matt and Sean were having sex or getting to it when sean's mom emerged from the door, holding a beer.
She kept shouting "He left me! Why!" and such.
Matt and sean were extrememly weirded out.
"Who?" Sean asked
"What's your dad's name?" Matt whispered into sean's ear.
:and this is when i remember what it said in word form:
So, Seans mom was later taken away by the wonderful gay fairy! Ethel.
That's it. It was actually funnier in my head but I just wanted to share.
| Lady of Crimson chapter 63 . 6/26/2011
I just keep wanting to say things! This was on my waiting list for such a long time because it was just sooo long but now it feels so nice that I did! To think it all started with "A goth with an accent" that likes a "Surfer Boi(redux sounds weird for this pun)" I cant tell you guys how awesome this is!