|Reviews for Outlaw|
| CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
Another nice one. But shouldn't the 'of' in the second line be moved to the end of 'world'? Good job anyway.
| Dark-BlueDeep chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
I like it, i really do, but the fact that you forgot the word 'of' in line 2 is pretty obvious. But please don't be offended!