Reviews for You Should Feel
vturnip chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
Very well said. I really liked this poem. There are times when I feel just like that.
Travis.R.Orth chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
that is the most fulfeeling poem but this is the last one of the day
till tomarrow
i will think of them always
thank you
for all
godbless
and goodnight
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
Holy hell.. (it's not holy, but you get the point)

Blew me away, far away. Incredible poem. I'm speechless. GREAT work!

Keep writing!
QueenOfTheUniverse chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
You've already got a mountain of reviews! But hey, why not one more? I have to say, I really like this poem! It's awesomely written! keep up the great work! btw, I like the quotes in your bio too! They're cute! The one about 10th, 11th, and 12th grade, is very true!
Michlostsoul chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
thats some good stuff. that the first poem i read off of fictionpress and it's real good. i feel that way sometimes and you captured it reall well
wildtenderness chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
wow *WOW*!poems that rhyme are always great to one was really great.i wonder how you could write poems that rhyme and not to mention,the length..my,you're a great poet!
Grendel chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Loved it! My favorite of yours so far. Make more plz...
wanderingcloud chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
I particularly liked it in your 7th stanza the lines "I live in a world/Eneveloped by mist". A scary thought, not to have feelings, but sometimes there are those points where I wish I didn't _; A wonderful rhyme!
taka and keichirou chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
komen...i had logged on earlier but is abit lazy now...

taka here..

oh, like this very much...great poem...you can even do rhymes...that's great...you know, you sometimes think that without emotions, how then, can you think that you 'are' without emotion...because really then, you won't feel anything at all, so you don't really care...

i love the thought of being devoid of feelings, there's just a certain irresitable curiousity about it...i'm rambling here, so...great work...would love to read more...

T
GohanKiSon chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
Really nice poem! I like the reference to automaton...not a word I hear thrown about so often. Oh, what song inspired you, out of curiosity?
Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
oh, so beautiful...and so true...i'm turning into an undead corpse just like this...i'm losing my emotion and just going psycotic. i was screaming at an ant last night and telling it that it was the sign of all evil and it should be destroyed. it was midnight. and i'd been working on final for 6 hours straight. anyway, wow...if i had room i'd put this on my favorites...this is amazing...and so true! i sympathize deeply with this, it describes my current situation so well...

~~alli~~
SpagettiO's chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
wow that was good, what song was it that inspired you?

Colette
LIZEROO chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
I REALLY LIKED IT! gr8 job! your rhymes aren't at all forced (it gets to me when people do that, though i myself do sometimes) and the whole feeling is gr8! to the fav list w/you. i'll b back to read more soon :)

*LIZ*

o an thanx for reviewing whatever it was of mine that you reviewed :D
StarlightOcean chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
It's beautiful...I definately know the feeling *sigh*, ah well...another wonderful poem!

Keep up the good work!
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
I had to. Sometimes you feel your existence in the world is a plain joke, as if you don't belong here but other time you were glad you did.
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