wow. i love how you were so loyal to the paper thing up to the end.

and there's something that that first line captures greatly.

really well done.

truly yours...

I loved this, so touching, great work!

This poem is great. It has very powerful emotions and it really touched me. Cool one! Keep up the good work!

wow ...
awesome poem.

Great metaphore and imagary in that.
Great work, i'll read more of your work another time.
S.O.S x

beautiful.

Wow. This is amazing. You really displayed your feelings well. It's just incredible.

whoa... this is...
whoa... fabulous.. absoultly fantastic! keep up the amazing work! this is going on my favs

Amazingly amazing. Every single f*ing line is absolutely *perfect*. I love you, and I love this, and...yes. Off to go check out more.

~lyv

Very true...i can relate to it. you have a very good sense of poetry and the emotions involved, its a sad poem that can make you cry becaouse practically every word seems to ooze with feeling. Well written.. Keep writing, BEsta luck..

Shards of a broken heart

I never thought someone could write something that fitted my exact thoughts. I loved the poem! Try and put more rhyme into it though

good poem thats full of emotion. i especially like the ending! well done! if you have any time could you review some of my work?

keep ritin! )

this is a really good poem.

and if what is stated is true, then it really hurts! you're a great writer so...KEEP IT UP!

Bravo,

That is GREAT. There are really no other words to describe it.

"Paper doesn't ache for you as I do." Beautiful. So expresive. and the "I'll make a paper aeroplance" sounds like something out of a song. I really liked it. Perfectly expresses the emotion of loss.