a web of deciet and lies! this is a piece that's intruiging in a sense that it challenges the morals of humanity and the reasons it presents. it also shows a certain element that outwits even time, the greatest thief of all.

oh, i like it, i like the imges brought to mind, good job keep writing

~kali~

Pretty pretty pretty! YEEHAW.

That was cool! Most poetry is just a series of images, but you managed to pull those images into an emotional journey. Good job!

That was really good, thanx for reviewing my poem, but what dose (good luck in welsh) mean?