Reviews for Confessions of a Torn Identity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow. I'm really into this. The begining of the story is crucial. I have read so many stories so far and not bothered to continue past the first chapter. but this has got me enthralled to read on. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has my curiosity. Please continue it. I'll be reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's something odd about the computers here, all the text came out screwy. I read the chapter by viewing the source code for the page... It's excellent. There was only one slight problem, and that was the "I'm certain", which didn't quite fit into the conversation. Other than that, it's an excellent story, and well begun. (Keep going!) ~Tchau |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad, waiting for another chapter though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that was really cool. Please write more soon! And... How did "Julianna" come into Kathy's mind? An explanation in another chapter would be interesting. Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOh ... u really got me on the edge of my seat . You better update soon and give me some explanation on who or what is this Julianna Blayde . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...interesting. Please post more! ~Alara-Sirinial-Amalon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent beginning! I once knew someone who made up alternate personalities... O_o It got very confusing. Anyway, thanx for the spelling tip (spelling never was my forte...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was interesting! Much better than I though.. Please write more, I'm really interested in seeing what happens |
![]() ![]() good start. Definatly more chapters are wanted. Nice job whith the internal conflict. Reminds me of when I was a new student. |