Some parts didn't flow nicely, but over all it was liquid. the rhymes were nicely done and the, i'll call it thr corus, is well placed. My favourite part is the last two lines of the last block, it was a very nice ending _

Dear Donna x,It is so strange that that is your name. I just happened by this song online here, by title and interest of course, I loved this song. I'd like you to know that you have made a new fan of your work (but not in that crazy/ psycho way!). Music and words together are the hight of human expression and art. May your artworks never lose their luster and spirit!Thanks...

Very well put extremely well job!

I love it! Great job!

Wow, awesome stuff. Very original and the words work very well together. Some of the rhythm seems a bit weird, but it looks like it can be sung. Excellent job!

Wow. This is... wow. Can't talk. *clicks add to favorites*

OOH! that is a cool song/poem!

very well done. i think it's kinda short...but thats just me.:D

This is pretty cool. I really like it. I think you did an excellent job with this. You did magnificecntly. If I could write like that, I'd be selling a book right now. Have you ever considered it? You might wanna. (*Applause*)

~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

Nicely done.

hi! . I really enjoyed this song. You did a wonderful job. Currently, i'm writing an original story that involves a band, would you be kind and let me use this song? . I'd be eternally grateful. My email is .