"How I wish that I could break

The bonds that secure my fate

Never linger in the past

Wishing I am free...

At last. "

I love that part! Its nice how it all flows with a joyful rhythm. Great poem, and thanks for reviewing my stuff!

Your work it stunts me... amazing is the only way to describe this piece

Beautiful poem, very peacuful and relaxing. Great!

omg.. **claps** you have such magnificent use of words I love it **claps**

-Anna-

Hey cool poem! I like how you rhyme at different places, it makes the poem really unique.

Bravo..Awesome piece of art. Do keep writing..

Nice imagery. . I loved it, it was very true...

! #$%&* Lyndz *&%$# !

Your poem was brilliant.

No improvements needed.

It was short and sweet and really made me think. [drat, back to earth now :( 'Never a stranger in my sight' is the only line I might disagree with]

Imi.

oh wow, it's such a pretty poem. I love how when I was reading it, the words seemed to bounce with a beat. Kind of like a rythm but it's not. Does that make sense? rofl.

Sweet, sentimental and natural imagery throughout your poem. I, also, liked how you emphasized your wish to be free in the breaks within the second and last stanzas - nice touch!

One tiny nit in your first line:

"How I hear my heart, it sing

Of love..."

An 's' is required at the end of 'sing'.

You perhaps have already noticed your small typo and already corrected it on your working copy. I am terribly prone to typos and never correct them until just before I send my work in to a publisher.

Good poem!

:-)

Lovely.

That's the only thing I can say! :O)

Thanks for reviewing my stuff too.:O)

this peom flows very nice. it's relaxing like...

Sentimental p. But its a nice poem. The words used are simple, but they convey the message nicely.

Fantastic! I love the peaceful descriptions of the setting!

I love this, it really seems to give off the essence of freedom. Good rhyming, too.

Mia :)