Beautiful,

makes me think I'm in heaven, I wish I were there right now, so life weren't so sad and hard, freedom is such an awesome way of escaping lifes chain wrapped around us, I love it!

keep writing more!

Very relaxing.

~Heart of the Sword

Wow. It really flows and you've got the rhyming down to a tee. Ahh, its made me feel all peacefull.

Super.

Liz.