Reviews for For Elyse
AlyLS chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
This is good - very refreshing. It's a nice change from most of the 'love' songs out there.
chickadee chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
yeah, it's repetitive, but in a good way. the repetition is definitely an asset. this is one of my favorite works of yours...there's just two lines i would alter a bit: "this is for the days that you made me feel bad/

this is for the times you said you were mad". if you change any of the rest of it, though, i'll be seriously bummed out. :}
Liller chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
very good. i like it a lot and i wish there was a way i could hear it... you're definitely really good at writing songs with a sort of bitter, angry feel. this one is no exception. it's really awesome, but it needs a proof-read. you might want to go over it and punctuate :) and i think i found one typing mistake. over all it's an extremely good song, though.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
aw, very pretty and sweet it think, it is a bit repetitive but i think that it can be gotten away with in songs, the flow defintely allows for it, moves right along i think while just reading it, that probably means you had some music in mind before writing, or not, im kinda stupid, anywayz, excellent song, full of emotion, nicely done
Needa S chapter 1 . 5/24/2003
Cool song.. meaningful! Awesome job!