it was pretty good...i like it.

This poem is soo good! I love this poem, it has true meaning to it. But, poems like this always have a true meaning. Not some romance bullshit, or how much u love ur friend. No, this poem is excellent! I would love to read more of ur poems, if u want 2 send 'em 2 me. well i hope i can read ur 1st version of this poem. thoughm it cant possibably be any better than this 1, well mybe.

Wow I like this. It's dark and angsty like you say but I love the way you make everything seem so fragile and tender. It's hard sometimes to write a poem when somebody gives you a title or stimulous, but you have done it realy well. Keep writing please!

Very well done! Don't know what else to say but that. Makes me want to go look at your other work..