Very interesting. I like it. I think you should write more; it is a very good story.

i like the story but i wonder when they are gonna meet

i love your idea of vampire love...

though if i might advise, use different paragraphs for every different dialogues. it will help readers from confusion and frustration.

zackire

wow , this sounds so awesome ! Your writing is great and I hope you continue ! Good Luck !

This is really good. I just read both chapters, and I think that you should really continue this.

Wow, this is good. I like it. I feel bad for the two of them tho. Hope you update soon!

Peachez _~

That was really great, perfect supporting chapter. Keep writing, I can't wait to find out what happens!

wo! i love your story. feel sorry for audrey though, must suck to haver kerry as a parent. newho please please write more!

dont suffer from insanity, enjoy every minute of it.

~Pothe

Of course you should continue it! This is a really fantastic beginning to what will hopefully be a great story. Keep writing!

~sal

i like it alot...keep writing

YOu ask the question should you continue, right ? Well that's a easy question that I need to anwser YES ARE YOU INSANE! I want to know what's going to happen next. Everything is great in this story. I just have a favor to ask you , can you please read one of my stories. UPdate please !

-Destin Scar