|Reviews for Love and Roses|
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
this is just so... sweet.
you give me
an inferiority complex.
| bloodyvelvetstrings chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
I loved this one too. It's very deep, and meaningful to me.
| Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Very nicely written...I especially love this stanza..
Hovering on the ceiling of the world
Among the clouds
A little lower than the angels
But higher than the dirt.
I love the way that you phrased that..
| Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 11/10/2003
hey, aw...thnx for telling me to read this...it's so adorable..yet sad somehow...i love these lines:
I don't care if you can dance,
You can walk, and that's enough for me.
That gives it such a qt touch... then the rose thing s simple gorgous, an enchanting poem, I love it! it's on my faves list! love and good luck, Mia
| Unknowable chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
I love the way this is almost ike a story, and not just a poem. A complete sotry that is. You should be rpoud of this. I love the line about 'our Eden'. And while, honestly, the title is cliche (as are most of my titles) your poem is anything but. It takes a standard idea and expands it, making it unique. Well done.
| marijke chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
Wow Claire. The best part about your writing is the incredible imagery that you use. I think though the poem itself is a little confusing-huh? Why doesn't he really love her? or-what's up? But then..confusing poetry is good ;)
| La Solange chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
Ah.. beautiful, Clarie. And you say your poetry stinks! v_v. I love this.
| Caelestius Zaden chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
So many senses are awakened by reading this! It also contains many images _ nice work!