This is great, thank you!

Wow, what a magnificent story! Your writing pulled me in, your characters were fantastic, and the plot had good, unexpected twists. I really enjoyed it!

Hi! I was just wondering if this story was based on the book 'Queen of Camelot' by Nancy McKenzie?

You had me in tears. It truly was a great story!

This chapter almost made me cry.

Your main character is truly beautiful. You've captured this story in its essence.

By building up, by showing her each year as she grows, you are allowing us to connect to her.

Again, great job.

Impressive.

It shared a variety of emotions which is needed in every story.

Great job!

It wasn't horrid.

so beauiful it was refreshing and yet sad i absoutly loved it!

WOW. Amazing story. I absolutely loved it, although I cried at the end when they both died.

Going to read the sequel now :)

who did that to Eldoris? What dis just happen? OH my gosh. that's all i can say. Oh, i love Calandra. I still like Isidore, Hope he finds the right woman for him. and btw, where are the parents of Isidore and Feodor?

What? No sons? that is a no no! Oh my gosh what would happen to Feodor in the battle. I really pity Isidore. Haixt.. on to the next chap.

You know I don't know how to react. I love all the men in Eldoris' life. I don't know, whose side to take. Is it Isidore or Feodor? I really don't , I'm not expecting such an act from Feodor it's so cute, is that even the right term? I don't know. ON to the next chap

WHAT? I thought this would be the time for Eldoris and Isidore to unite! Wah, i wanna cry! D*mn so evil w*tch Kalonice would get what she want? Oh no please?

yay! Isidore is back for good.

i really hate that b*tch Chloe and her wh*re daughter Kalonice. D*mn i so much wanted to kill them! :( [my nose are flaring in anger]