I was so surprised when i found out that she was going to marry Feodor but it seems like its going to end up a good match. Cant wait to move on to the next chapter.

I like this story so far. D

oh!that was so sad. oh! now i'm all choked up. :( so sad.

this is such a good story. i am really into greek gods and goddeses too. i love things like that. it's just so sad with isidore you know? i mean, i didn't cry, but it must be hard to love two people though you know you are made for the one you loves second. especially if they're brothers. so sad.

that was so sad! i dont think ive cried over a story so much in such a long time, lol...silly emotions...i love it by the way!

~smurf~

very interesting and enjoyable story :)

I dont think I have read a story this good in a long while. I like the fact that it has its moments of tragdy and grief, brings a little more.. well something good to the story. Can't wait to read more :)

*DarK-FreEdoM

Beautiful story. Excellent writing. Very enjoyable to read. Sad ending though, but works so well with the story. Thank you! :D

OMFG...this story was good! It really was

i love the ending.

it's so tragically perfect.

that's so fucking sad.

gah!

but i guess it would be boring if they had ended up together.

i like how you incorporated greek myths into your story.

it's so awesome!

oh my goodness...

that was the freaking most cutest best everything good story EVER!

that sentence really doesn't make sense... but... i seriously can't explain how amazing this story was.

yes, tragic ending with some happiness. :]] at least feodor and eldoris were together.. ah... this story was so good. the ending made me cry like crazy.

NOW! off to read the sequal and smite Kalonice! yay!

aw, i wanted her to marry isadore :(

OK, now I'm VERY sure you've read Queen Of Camelot by Nancy McKenzie. If I'm wrong then...oops? Anyways, no insults intended if I have implied anything(I'm not saying I did...). Like it so far!