Reviews for sweet poison
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
I know people who I feel this way about emotionally. Near-perfect phrasing with no extraneous words. neat simplicity is the best thing about this poem.
Kalopsia chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
you play well with alliteration in this poem. i absolutely LOVE this poem. i wonder why u havent gotten many reviews for this...?
Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Amazing! I absolutely love the imagery... "sweet poison" "saccharine kisses" "silken slime"
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Wow! Interesting subject! I like the way that it can have several meanings... Cool writing style!

CoolBeans18s
Lux's Confusion chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
i love the use of words you used in this one. it's simple and lets the reader decided for them selves what it means rather than spoonfeeding them. i like that about your work, the uniquness of your style. since i have a thing for vampires and i live in my own special world, i like this in a different way. awesome job!

Jasmine
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Interesting poem. You have a unique writing style. Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
ShadowGal chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
Nice. The phrasing-or perhaps the formatting, not sure which-confused me a bit at times, but overall this is still a good poem. Keep writing!