Reviews for Afraid to Say
quadellic chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
The rhyme scheme seemed to lag a bit, but it still pulled out very nicely. Many rhyming poetry losses its original view as the author is desperatly searching for a word to fit in the next line, you see a lot of that here on fiction press *blushes*, But this poem side stepped that perfectly! I loved it, you ended it seemed with the intended message and I admonish you for it, I find it is the most common problem in my poems.

Good work!


Please R/R some of my stuff?
alsdjf chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
Sao: You know, I've felt just like that before!

HOS: Of course, since she's no poet, they don't find out in any way whatsoever.

Sao: But that's besides the point. Beautiful poem, as to be expected from you! Now, we have to go read the other ones we haven't read, or at least some of them. Buh-bye!

~Sao & HOS