|Reviews for perfect on the out|
| Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
That is so like some people I know...Like me too sometimes...but I gave up that mask for another that's is barely covering the surface. In fact, if you looked hard and close enough, you'd be able to see right through it...just like some people are able to, but not many...
| Gauy chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
Yeah, another me. But we're far from perfect, but a lot of the time, they want to see us as flawless...
| broken wings241 chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
oh, would you believe it, I haven't reviewed this. Yeah, no one thinks the smart kid who has everything could posess issues on the side. (COnsidering the kid has everything, by definition of the word, you'd think ppl would expect you to have issues, but no... everything makes you happy. Everything also includes pain and tears and nothing.)
| The Crazy Cricket chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
Yep. Know *exactly* what that feels like. (Well, not exactly. I could never exactly know how you feel, that's immpossible. But I have experienced something like it.) That role drove (still drives) me mad. Only now my cover is slowly slipping. Not sure whether that's a good or bad thing...
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
that's great. nice work... so full of feeling...
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 5/27/2003
Excellent. Absolutely excellent. This poem pretty much sums up what I am feeling at the moment. It's nice to know that perhaps I'm not the only one. This is going on my faves. Keep writing :)