Reviews for Shrinking Bernie
Bird That Flies At Dawn chapter 10 . 8/11/2012
This story is touching with its true reality. Great job.
lostinrhapsody chapter 10 . 2/15/2006
a satisfying ending because its true that EDs never leave you completely...good luck Bernie and thank you for writng this story!
lostinrhapsody chapter 8 . 2/15/2006
if only life were that pretty D im not saying i had a terribly bad experience myself, but in some cases people don't get off so easily...i like karla though, and bernie lol and im glad it worked out...best friends are meant to stay together!
lostinrhapsody chapter 6 . 2/15/2006
thats the thing...Karla thinks that she should wait, and if she came out and talked to Bernie it proly would have been better...i know its what i wanted...
lostinrhapsody chapter 5 . 2/15/2006
very cute chapter...
lostinrhapsody chapter 4 . 2/15/2006
the meaning of imbedded messages aren't lost on your subtlety, and i really like that...
lostinrhapsody chapter 3 . 2/15/2006
the initial thrill...your chapters are so truely written and realistic...
lostinrhapsody chapter 2 . 2/15/2006
its sad that i remember when i was first like this, and putting into words just helps me feel like im not alone, nice chapter!
lostinrhapsody chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
I love the unique narration style...i really feel connected to Bernie
Lady Velvet chapter 10 . 11/8/2003
I did enjoy this story a lot. I love the style, it appeals to me. I think the length is just perfect, it isn't rushed and it isn't long-winded. I think you should be very proud of this.
ashley chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
This is very good! I like the writing style!
lithe chapter 10 . 6/27/2003
i love this story. it seems so real, and you write really well.
Katie chapter 10 . 6/24/2003
This story was excellent. You put in so much feeling into it. Great job, keep writing! D
Ariel chapter 8 . 6/20/2003
Aw thats kinda sad that last chapter
ionlyliveindreams chapter 6 . 6/19/2003
uh oh... I wonder what's going to happen at the party. The way Bernie eats reminds me of me. I never eat breakfast or lunch and only sometimes I'll eat dinner... I'm not anorexic, but my metabolism is really really slow. Anyways, I need more! Post more soon!

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