Reviews for War Freaks and Greeks: The Story of a HalfMortal
Maki the insane phyco chapter 2 . 9/6/2003
Hello, this is lola...maki's victume/friend!

Well im using her computer right now so this means im using her name...meh!

well just wanted to say love your story! Must write more...understand!

and now *drum roll* MAKI!

Maki: hello, fox dance! great story so far. i usualy read my reviewers stories after they review. so...thanks for the review, and ur story is hillarius!
Talon Blackwood chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
Very well written, very anime styleish. Good work.
Flamehail chapter 2 . 8/25/2003
Well, that was interesting. What a cool concept! I like it.

I didn't see too many problems. A few typos, an obsession with dashes that don't really need to be there, a few awkward phrases, but nothing major. _

Keep it up!

Flamehail
Milana Pashmina chapter 2 . 8/24/2003
LOL! This was such a funny ass story! You're done with it, but ha ha, I like it! Oh, and thanks for reading my story...LOL! You're the only person I haven't had to threaten, beg, or blackmail into reading and reviewing...LOL, anywho, I like this story so much, it's going on my fave's list
futagoat02 chapter 2 . 8/24/2003
love the story, gotta be interesting! it's a wonderful world... like it, love it, update soon!

baibaiyukie
Schubiegirl chapter 2 . 8/15/2003
That was the funniest thing i have ever read. i hope you write more! . i love how you depicted the gods as more modern and well, just... funny. I think my fav. char so far is Eros, an unlikely, frankly rather dorky hero who probably started this whole mess. But at least he did save California. I love the, well actually... rather humerous descriptions, and the fact that they're told from a fellow evil phsycopath's point of view. Keep it up!
Mako-Charon chapter 2 . 8/11/2003
more please T_T this is so good. I need more.
blahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh chapter 2 . 8/11/2003
this is the most weirdest, funny, story i have ever, ever, read. and i can't wait till the next chapter. you are really good at writing and i hope that you post the next chapter soon. well keep up the good writing.

Melshenia Kari
Kayleen chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Wow! What a cute little story (if cute is what you can call it...)! I love mythology, and this story is truly an original. Keep up the good work! Oh, and thanks for reviewing my story!
amet chapter 2 . 7/16/2003
ROFL. Poor Eros... He was just trying to save the world too- Oh well.
r.mai chapter 2 . 7/15/2003
AW! NO MORE! damned it all. it was getting pretty interesting! -_-
IHJ chapter 2 . 7/14/2003
Hot diggity d mn! Great story! Hooked me from the first chapter! AHH! Must update! Or else...the pain, the pain...must read more... PLEASE update as soon as possible. I hope you don't lose interest in this story! *two thumbs up*
RedLady chapter 2 . 7/12/2003
Aw.. how sweet. _
ibgone chapter 2 . 7/9/2003
oh, man, this is so funny! I can't wait to read more.
ibgone chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Hey, this is pretty good...and funny! In fact, it's just as good as your Fox Trail story (which reminds me, I still have to read the other three chapters).
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